Pre-AP English II: IWA #2 Thesis Paragraph Model

Consider using the following as a thesis paragraph for your second IWA.

In Lord of the Flies,
choose a boy
Ralph
Piggy
Jack uses
choose an appeal
Logos
Pathos
Ethos to try to persuade the other boys to follow him. Golding shows this by
choose the same boy again
Ralph's
Piggy's
Jack's use of
choose one
diction
imagery
simile
metaphor
alliteration
personification
etc. and
choose another
diction
imagery
simile
metaphor
alliteration
personification
etc. when trying to lead the boys.

Feel free to use the exact wording, punctuation, spelling, grammar, etc., above.

Failure to include a thesis paragraph in your IWA will result in an immediate REDO grade (no credit).